It is important fot children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers ne allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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should be taught from the early stages of life

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what is right and what is wrong, and as the term of

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statement, some people would highly recommend punishment as a significant tool.

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agree that there should be some methods of nurturing them, I think using penalty as a

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object might just have detrimental consequences on

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's life. The first point to take into account is conducting new

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, the encouraging ones. What I mean is,

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of

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scouting

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youngsters for their false behaviour, it is more beneficial to encourage them into doing positive activities which can help them improve their

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competence

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character

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, parents and instructors play a crucial role in teaching them how to be

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their actions, and at the same time, they can state the negative side of

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cruelty

. The second point is that penalizing

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can have

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harmful and

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effects on their mentality and spiritual aspects or even on their physical status.

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, by remarking and highlighting the negative features of your child, you would merely

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suppress

their emotions and

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their self-confidence.

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, a number of

children

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can lose their physical ability and face some serious flaws

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body punishment. In conclusion, a majority of people still think that

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scouting

is necessary

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rising up your youngster,

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I firmly believe that there are some other ways to help them distinguish the difference between false and right.