Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In

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world, a great number of

people

believe that the

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legislation

of

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death

penalty

for

people

who have

commited

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committed

violent

crimes

is unreasonable. In spite of

this

statement, I oppose

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that idea and believe that the

governement

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government

should advocate

death

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the death

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penalty

to

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criminals that commit excessive

crimes

. In

this

essay

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I will discuss

this

issue and will explain my opinion.

Firstly

, Having

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death

penalty

can decrease

crime

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rate. Having a punishment

that is

so extreme

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might prevent criminals from making useless risks and would avoid committing a felony.

Although

forming a

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legislation

of

death

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penalty

will not prevent every single crime from being

commited

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committed

, I do believe that it will help to create a downfall in the

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of

crimes

.

Furthermore

, the

death

of a violent criminal would make society a safe place. Having

death

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penalty

legal

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a person who made terrible felonies will guarantee that

this

prisoner will not return to the streets after finishing his

sentance

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sentence

.

Consequently

, it will prevent any future

crimes

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from being

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commited

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committed

from

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the specific criminal,

for example

, a

seriel

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serial

killer who was bound to

death

will prevent any

further

murders.

On the other hand

, some

people

say that “

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crime” is an

unbased

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unbiased

term and has a grey area.

For instance

, some could say that shoplifting counts as a violent crime exactly like murder. Since it's an individual opinion, having a

death

penalty

optional for every single criminal could lead to

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a wrong

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decision from

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and could cause unnecessary deaths.

However

, in

an extremely violent

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extremely violent cases

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cases

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there are many

people

involved throughout

court

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the court

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,

such

as the state, a jury and a judge who will advise

with

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each other in order to make the right decision. In conclusion, despite

death

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penalty

is

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an outdated idea and can lead to unjustified punishments,

i

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think that the government should be able to use

death

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the death

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penalty

for

extremly

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extremely

violent cases in order to live in a safer society.