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THE DIAGRAMS BELOW SHOW THE STAGES and equipment used in the cement-making process

THE DIAGRAMS BELOW SHOW THE STAGES and equipment used in the cement-making process
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The diagrams below show how
cement
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 is produced in a
cement
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 factory
furthermore
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 they show which equipment is used in the
cement
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-making process and how
cement
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 is used to produce concrete for buildings targets. In the first step, Limestone and Clay are poured into the crusher
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 become powder and mix with each other with a Mixer device . Afterwards, they are placed in a Rotating heater and become hot with heat. By the next step, they are settled on the Grinder and
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 turn into
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 .
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, the products are packed in some kinds of bags and prepared for their different destinations.
cement
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 is used for several purposes one of them is making concrete. In ,fact 15% of concrete
production
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 includes
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 and
such
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production
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 is needing 10%Water 25%ofSand and 50% of Gravel. They should mix with each other entirely well. Unlike
cement
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production
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 concrete
production
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 does not contain complicated processes and the materials just have to mix with no extra step.
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