The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Despite many

people

stating that the most important

consideration

before choosing a

job

is the salary, I believe that there are more important things to consider. In

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will discuss the importance of considering

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income

and other considerations before picking a

career

.

Firstly

, money is an important

consideration

for financial security.

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working in a

job

with

great

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income

, you will provide yourself

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privilege of living a comfortable life with no worry of going into

debts

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. Having

this

state of mind will benefit

people

’s mental health

,

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since they don’t stress over money.

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, having a

career

with

great

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income

is a great motivation tool. Working in a place where your salary is high, you would like to keep working in

this

job

, which means that your working skills will uprise and you will do your best every day. In spite of the previous arguments,

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must concede that there are other considerations to think about before picking a

career

that

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more important than

income

. The first

consideration

to think about is

passion

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for your

job

.

People

spend most of their lives working in their work, so it’s important to have your life spent doing what you love. In recent years many

people

had

abondaded

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abandoned

their dream jobs in order to receive a high

income

instead

,

although

the salary is rewarding, working in a

job

that you hate or

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qualified for could lead to bad mental health

such

as depression.Studies have shown that

people

who work in jobs that they love and feel like they are giving back to the community had lived a longer life than

people

with jobs that they didn’t like. I believe that working in a

job

that you hate and is stressful doesn’t worth the financial reward. Another

consideration

is free

time

. Having free

time

besides

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work is really meaningful,

wheather

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whether

it’s parents who want to spend

time

with their kids or other

people

who’d like to have spare

time

for leisure, you would like to have the ability to have other priorities

beside

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your

job

. Having a

job

with

major

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amount of hours spent in the office is

menatly

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mentally

unhealthy and could even lead to poor

job

exacutions

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executions

execution

. In conclusion,

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agree with

people

who are saying that

income

is a major

consideration

before picking a

career

.

However

,

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believe that there are other considerations that are more important.