You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and

Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing

the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart depicts the
number
of
homes
constructed each year in two different cities from 2000 to 2009. It is clear from the graph that the
number
of houses built in derby
city
reached the highest rate in 2009 ,
while
the total
number
of
homes
built covered the lowest amount in Nottingham
City
.
According to
what is shown, in derby ,
city
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the city
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the
quantity
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of
homes
built in 2000 ranked the lowest point at around 49% . From 2003 to 2007 the average
number
of habitats built had similar patterns with a figure of 100%.
On the other hand
, in Nottingham
City
. During 2002 the rate of
homes
built decreased by 0 approximately. In 2007 the rate had increased by 200 nearly. After that period ,the percentage was doubled to 250 in 2007
To conclude
we could say that the
number
of houses built in Derby
city
rocked to the highest
number
over the period shown.
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