Task 1 The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The diagram reveals the phases involved in the production of dairy products.

Overall

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, it was shown that dairy goods must pass through 8 different stages to be produced for consumption.

This

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is done on the farm and in the factory.

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with, the first stage involves the rearing of healthy cows on the farm which is called cow grazing in the image provided. It was shown that

after

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this

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process, milking equipment will be used in collecting milk from the cow in the morning and in the evening which is twice daily on the farm.Moreso, milk collected will be refrigerated in order to preserve and prevent it from spoilage which will be later transferred to the diary for pasteurization in order to make products

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as yoghurt, cheese etc

Furthermore

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, these goods

such

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as butter and cheese will later be packaged into attractive containers or wraps which is done in the factory to make them more valuable and attractive to customers.

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this

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is done different dairy products produced will

then

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be distributed to different wholesale and retail shops.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

180 words

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