The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featured

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featured
The process diagram explains how dairy and its varieties are being produced
Overall
,the process is divided into 8 stages, starting with healthy cows grazing and feeding on green grass in the field to the final products being distributed to stores for consumption.
To begin
with, healthy cows are reared on the farm to consume green grass for adequate raw
milk
secretion,
then
are
subsequently
gathered in a clean room where they are milked twice a day using the milking machine and these
milk
are kept refrigerated to avoid spoilage.
Subsequently
,
this
milk
is
then
transported to the diary through the
milk
tanker. In the diary, the raw
milk
is
then
processed and either packaged in bottles as pasteurized
milk
to be consumed like that or produced in the form of cheese, cream and butter to be eaten with bread which is
then
distributed in stores, shops and supermarkets for daily consumption
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