The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced .  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced . 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
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The process diagram illustrates the various steps involved in the production of milk and its varieties.
Overall
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, there are 8 steps involved in the manufacturing of dairy products. The first 4 steps take place on the farm
while
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the
last
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four are done in the factory and the finished products end up in the shop for consumption.
To begin
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with, cows are well fed by grazing on well-cultivated farms to boost their production before they are taken for milking in the machine room.
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, the process of extraction from the cows is done twice daily usually morning and evening.
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, The extracted milk is stored in the refrigerator to maintain the temperature and prevent souring before a delivery van takes it to the factory for processing.
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, at the factory, the milk is pasteurized and packaged.
In addition
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, it can be made into cheese , cream or butter and sent to the shop for sale to the final consumers.
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