The diagram below shows the process of milk production

The diagram below shows the process of milk production
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The process diagram illustrates the
steps
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involved in the
manufaction
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manufacture
of dairy and related varieties
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, there are eight
steps
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involved in the production of
milk
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. The first four
steps
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takes
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place on the farm
while
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the final
steps
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took place at the factory To start with, healthy farm
cattles
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cattle
are reared and made to eat grass in an open field to enable them
make
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to make
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adequate
milk
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. After which the
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milk making
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milk-making
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machine
extract
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extracts
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milk
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from the cows twice a day.
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, the extracted
milk
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are
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is
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stored in a refrigerator in order to prevent spoilage. The extracted diary is
then
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transported by a van to the factory for the second stage. At the factory, the
milk
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is transferred into a machine which separates it into
milk
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, cheese, cream and butter.
Subsequently
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, the
milk
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is pasteurized and packaged in various bottles. The packaged products are
then
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sent to the supermarket and shops for final consumers

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words steps, milk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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