The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The picture explains the manufacturing of

milk

and similar goods

Overall

, It can be seen that production of dairy

product

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products

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begins with cow grazing and stops at selling

of

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apply

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the end product at stores

To begin

,cows are reared on the farm for proper raw

milk

secretion ,

then

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and then

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milk

are

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is

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collected and

are

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apply

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milked twice with

milking

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the milking

a milking

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machine, the

milk

are

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is

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thereby preserved in the refrigerator to cool

it

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temperature and prevent it from spoiling .

Furthermore

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the stored

milk

is thereby delivered to

dairy

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the dairy

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via

milk

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a milk

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tanker In the diary room ,

these

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this

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liquid is

the

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then

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converted into cheese, cream and butter as well

pasteurized

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as pasteurized

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milk

Finally

, the

milk

are

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then

packaged in a container well sealed and disturbed to the groceries stores for sale and human consumption