The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the process by which milk  and related products are produced.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The process diagram illustrates the steps by which cream and other products are manufactured.
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according to
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the illustration above, there are a total of eight stages beginning from the cow grazing and ending with the sales of the finished products at the supermarket and shops.
To begin
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with,the cows are been released to feed on green grass after that they are kept in a room where a milking machine is kept and buttermilk is extracted twice a day ,
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the cream collected is stored in the refrigerator.moreso,the cream tanker comes daily to deliver the product to the dairy .
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,from the dairy ,sections milk will undergo the process called pasteurization in order to make yoghurt and cheese and after the milk is pasteurized,it will be packaged well into different gallons or containers.
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, after the creams are packaged well into nice and attractive containers are now taken to different shops and supermarket that has made order and want to sell to society for consumption.
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