Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Generally, all
peoples
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people
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buy some
products
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not only seen of the
price
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but
also
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the
quality
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of the
product
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. I think it’s
totally
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a totally
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negative development if
people
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are able to buy the same
products
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anywhere in the
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to make the
countries
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more similar. In fact, every
product
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in any
country
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has its own
characteristic
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characteristics
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from the
quality
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or
price
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depend
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depending
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on the target market
although
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it is the same
product
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.
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every
country
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in the
world
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has its characteristic
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product
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products
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with their
quality
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and
price
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.
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, there is always good
quality
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.
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, all
people
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come into the mall to buy some shirts or jeans from a brand from
the other
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another
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country
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because it
has
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is
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a
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of
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good
quality
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but a little bit expensive for the
price
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.
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However
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there is so many
brand
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brands
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form
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from
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our
countries
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that
not
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are not
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popular
whereas
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it
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they
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have
a
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apply
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good
quality
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also
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.
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, the
price
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of the
products
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in
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apply
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anywhere in the
world
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is too expensive
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our
country
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. I think
its
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it
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depend
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depends
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from
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on
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the
quality
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. In
this
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case, many artists in our
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buy some bags from a popular brand
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at
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the
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a
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very expensive
price
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. Because they have their own ego enhancement to buy expensive
products
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and look glamour with us that
products
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.
in addition
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in our
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country
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country,
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there must
also
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products
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be products
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with
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of
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good
quality
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and
price
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that they need.
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, all
people
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must
proud
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and
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use
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our
products
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to increase the development of the
countries
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. It is clear I think
its
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it is
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negative
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a negative
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development if
countries
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are becoming more and more similar if
people
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are able to buy the same
products
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anywhere in the
world
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. All
people
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in our
country
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must be looking forward to potential
products
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that they have in their own
countries
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with good
quality
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and
price
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also
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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