Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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peoples
buy some Fix the agreement mistake
people
products
not only seen of the price
but also
the quality
of the product
. I think it’s totally
negative development if Correct article usage
a totally
people
are able to buy the same products
anywhere in the world
to make the countries
more similar. In fact, every product
in any country
has its own characteristic
from the Fix the agreement mistake
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quality
or price
depend
on the target market Wrong verb form
depending
although
it is the same product
. First,
every country
in the world
has its characteristic product
with their Fix the agreement mistake
products
quality
and price
. However
, there is always good quality
. For example
, all people
come into the mall to buy some shirts or jeans from a brand from the other
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another
country
because it has
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is
a
good Correct your spelling
of
quality
but a little bit expensive for the price
. However
there is so many Add a comma
However,
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brands
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from
countries
that not
popular Add a missing verb
are not
whereas
it
have Correct pronoun usage
they
a
good Correct article usage
apply
quality
also
. Secondly
, the price
of the products
in
anywhere in the Change preposition
apply
world
is too expensive then
our country
. I think its
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it
depend
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depends
from
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on
quality
. In this
case, many artists in our country
buy some bags from a popular brand with
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at
the
very expensive Correct article usage
a
price
. Because they have their own ego enhancement to buy expensive products
and look glamour with us that products
. in addition
in our country
there must Add a comma
country,
also
products
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be products
with
good Change preposition
of
quality
and price
that they need. Finally
, all people
must proud
and Add a missing verb
be proud
used
our Wrong verb form
use
products
to increase the development of the countries
. It is clear I think its
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it is
negative
development if Correct article usage
a negative
countries
are becoming more and more similar if people
are able to buy the same products
anywhere in the world
. All people
in our country
must be looking forward to potential products
that they have in their own countries
with good quality
and price
also
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