The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the chart show how it was distributed
The table chart depicts cops funding in a particular area in Britain from three different sources between 2017 and 2018
while
the pie charts show how the money was disbursed. The unit of measurement is in million
pounds
.
Overall
, it is evident that that
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three sectors increased over the years with local taxes experiencing the most significant increase in Correct article usage
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allocation
of Correct article usage
the allocation
funds
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majority of the Add an article
the vast
funds
were used for the payment of workers
wages.
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According to
the table, the national government contributed 175.5 million
pounds
to the police budget in 2017, the amount rose to about 177.8 million
pounds
in the following year. However
, local taxation experienced the greatest growth in funds
as the value increased from 91.2 in 2017 to 102.3 million
pounds
in 2018. Correct your spelling
Meanwhile
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, other sources saw an increase of half a Correct your spelling
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million
pounds
between 2017 and 2018
In terms of budgetary, more than half of the money generated were
used for sorting salaries of Change the verb form
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staffs
and police. Fix the agreement mistake
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Although
this
figure decreased by 6% in 2018. Whereas
, money for technology in 2018 was almost twice it
figure in 2017 Correct pronoun usage
its
while
the proportion of funds
for building and transport remained unchanged.Submitted by oludayotemilade on
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