The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given line chart illustrates the
number
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of abroad
visitors
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to the coast, the mountains, and the lakes in European
country
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from 1987 to 2007.
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, it can be clearly seen that there was a significant increase in overseas
visitors
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for the three areas except for the lakes where a downward was seen in 2002. In 1987, there were 20,000 tourists who visited the mountains.
This
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number
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rose to 30,000 in 1997 and 2002 and achieved a peak in 2007 at around 35,000
visitors
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. The coastal area was popular among the other areas for abroad tourists in 1987 when 40,000
people
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visited
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area.
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, there was a slight decrease to around 35,000
people
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in the next five years.
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, the
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of tourists who visited the coast has risen for the rest of the years recorded in the chart and became the most popular place in 2007 among other places. 10,000
people
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visited the lakes in 1987 and it became the least popular tourist destination in a European country. The
number
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of
visitors
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had a significant increase to about 75,000
people
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in 2002, even though
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number
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was felt by 25,000 in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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