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The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart depicts the number of
houses
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 in Derby and Nottingham that were built during nine years. The prominent information from the development of housing is in 2009 which was the highest number of
houses
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 in those cities. Both in Derby and Nottingham, the trend of housing tends to increase every
year
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. In Derby, the lowest total of
houses
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 reached under 50 in 2002, 2006, and 2008. It can be seen that from 2000 to 2001, there were only below 50
houses
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.
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, the highest number of
houses
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 happened in 2009 which was about 350.
This
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 was the most developed house from 2000-2009. Meanwhile, trend the owning of
houses
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 in Nottingham tends to increase every
year
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. Starting in 2003, the development of
houses
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 had the same trend that reached around 100-150
houses
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 per
year
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. From 2007 to 2009, the increase in building
houses
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 had significantly increased which had doubled from the previous
year
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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