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Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think is a complete waste of time. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this Statement?

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Compulsory studying in different
subjects
 for
students
 has some opponents between people that they believe it is useless
work
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 and
time
-consuming for
students
. I think it is true in some
subjects
. Actually, each student has a special talent that he/she does not aware of . So, a short acquaintance study around it can help them to discover their interest at school. If these kinds of part-
time
 studies are in Primary School especially, certainly, it will be useful for them in their adulthood to choose their job and field of activity. To my mind, regardless of the benefits of its start
time
 in childhood, the main factor of these kinds of education should be limited to giving a little information to
students
 just for more familiarity and more avoidance of confusion in their choice
time
.
On the other hand
, I think, it is true that compulsory study of all
subjects
 for
students
 will not be helpful for them because, when a student has to spend more
time
 studying a subject
that is
 not his/her prefer, surely, it can reduce efficiency and effectiveness in his/her future job. It is not that, the
students
 specifically can have free training without any supervision, because of his/her lack of interest.It is that the
students
 can participate in short-
time
 courses just for finding their talent or interest, so they will continue and develop it in future.
For instance
, maybe music interests some
students
 but, other
students
 are lovers of sports so, becoming a famous athlete is their wish. Mat, chemistry، theatre, marketing and stuff like
this
 are important for some of them. In conclusion, I think, studying different
subjects
while
, will be useful if it is not compulsory for
students
, as some people believe that all
students
 do not necessarily spend more
time
 on every education.
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