The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of five types of books sold by a bookseller in the given period. The unit
are
measured in percentage.
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is
Overall
, the adult Linking Words
fiction’s
Change noun form
fiction
Use synonyms
book
become more and more increased in 2012 Fix the agreement mistake
books
whereas
biography Linking Words
Use synonyms
book
went down gradually.
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books
According to
the data, there are some books which increased sharply, namely adult and kids Linking Words
book
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the adult fiction Linking Words
book
share became more than double for over 40 years around 45%. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the proportion of children’s Linking Words
Use synonyms
book
rose gradually in 1997, 1992, Fix the agreement mistake
books
2012
about 20%, 22%, Correct word choice
and 2012
25
% respectively.
Correct word choice
and 25
On the contrary
, the biography Linking Words
book
, Use synonyms
stood
at a fifth in 1972, plunge more than a half in 2012 approximately eight per cent. Correct pronoun usage
which stood
Moreover
, the others Linking Words
book
decreased steadily from one quarter in 1972 to 12% in 2012.
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Then
, the travel Linking Words
book
fluctuated during the 40 years period. Stood at 15% in 1972, rose slightly Use synonyms
just
under a fifth in 2012, and in the next twenty years the travel Change preposition
to just
book
Use synonyms
drop
to one in ten.Wrong verb form
dropped
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Vocabulary: Replace the words book with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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