아래의 원형 차트는 2003년과 2013년 뉴질랜드 소매 부문의 온라인 쇼핑 판매를 쇼핑하여 주요 기능을 선택 및 보고하고 관련된 경우 비교하여 정보를 요약합니다.

아래의 원형 차트는 2003년과 2013년 뉴질랜드 소매 부문의 온라인 쇼핑 판매를 쇼핑하여 주요 기능을 선택 및 보고하고 관련된 경우 비교하여 정보를 요약합니다.
The pie chart demonstrates that New Zealand’s online shopping retail figures include four categories: navigation,film/music,books and clothes.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the rate of excursion retail was the largest in 2003,but In 2003, the rate of film and music showed an upward.
Moreover
, the figure for people who buy books was the lowest.
However
, it became bigger retail rates in 2013. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the Entertaining field had raised about 13% for 10 years from 2003 to 2013,so it accounted for 33% of the retail percentage for the first ranking in 2013. Another point of note is that buyers who spent money on books was 19% in 2003 and
then
it increased to 22% in 2003, which did not significantly change. Meanwhile, the travel field decreased sharply, which means it fell from 36% in 2003 to 29% in 2013.
Finally
, clothes buyers
also
dropped equally to the travel field. As I mentioned earlier, it fell one-third 24% from 2003 to 16%in 2013.
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