The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
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The given bar chart shows information about three various sea mammals
population
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in the Gormez straits during the given 12-year time period. From the figure,
it is clear that
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the
population
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of these aquatic animals rose between the years,
while
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some mild fluctuations between. As seen in the chart, in 2006, the most populated sea animal in the straits was seals and
this
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peak
number
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was more than two-fifths;
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however
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its
population
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fell steadily to almost a quarter in 2010.
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, between these two years, the
population
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of whales and dolphins saw a slight climb. When the former’s
number
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grew from 23 to 26, the latter’s
number
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increased from 17 to 22. And during the given time period seals
population
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saw significant growth from 25 to 44, and the figure for dolphins experienced a sharp climb from almost a fifth to around 52 between 2010 and 2018 .
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, the total
number
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of whales in the Gormez Straits was 28, which was just 6 more than in 2014.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • Recorded
  • Gormez Straits
  • Fluctuation
  • Seals
  • Whales
  • Dolphins
  • Height
  • Individuals
  • Steadily declined
  • Relatively stable
  • Lowest
  • Significant increase
  • Approximately
  • Slight recovery
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