the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
The two maps give information about the driveway to a
city
hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, there are plenty of changes that happened throughout the period. They include bus
stops, roundabouts and car parks.
In 2007, there are 6 bus
stops along the hospital road, which is between the city
hospital and the city
road. There are located opposite to
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Moreover
, there is one auto park for everyone, including staff and the public. It is located on the east side of bus
stops.
In 2010, car parks are separate: for the staff and the local people. The former is located on the east side of the city
hospital, while
the latter is the same as the car park in 2007. Opposite to
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this
place, there is a large bus
station, instead
of small stops like in 2007. Between them located 2 roundabouts, which could make the movements of vehicles more convenient.Submitted by muharodnoy on
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