the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
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The two maps give information about the driveway to a
city
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hospital between 2007 and 2010.
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, there are plenty of changes that happened throughout the period. They include
bus
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stops, roundabouts and car parks. In 2007, there are 6
bus
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stops along the hospital road, which is between the
city
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hospital and the
city
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road. There are located opposite
to
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each other.
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, there is one auto park for everyone, including staff and the public. It is located on the east side of
bus
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stops. In 2010, car parks are separate: for the staff and the local people. The former is located on the east side of the
city
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hospital,
while
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the latter is the same as the car park in 2007. Opposite
to
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this
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place, there is a large
bus
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station,
instead
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of small stops like in 2007. Between them located 2 roundabouts, which could make the movements of vehicles more convenient.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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