■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

    ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates, during the
period
between 1990 and 2010, the proportion of the amount given to
charity
by British citizens.
Overall
, the Blue bar represents the
period
from 1990 and the orange colour bar is 2010.
According to
the graph,
it is clear that
,
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middle
age
people
provided more amount in the
period
1990,
while
youngsters gave
money
to
charity
is less in the
year
2010.
To begin
with, starts with the
age
range 18-25, both the
year
only a few
people
contribute amount to the
charity
.
That is
17% in 1990 and 6% in 2010.
Furthermore
, in 1990 only 31% of
people
, which are between the
age
of 26-35, gives
money
to welfare and
also
near to 25% of individuals in 2010. In the beginning
period
, in the
age
range of 36-50, 44% of humans paid
money
to
charity
.
As well as
in 2010, significantly it went down and reach 35%.
However
, In the old
age
that is
51-65, In the
year
1990, 35% of
people
contribute
money
to
charity
.
Whereas
in 2010, it increased to 4% which is 39%.
Last
but not least,
those
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above 65
age
, residents spend
money
on
charity
about 34% in the
year
1990 and 35% in 2010.
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