■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates, during the
period
between 1990 and 2010, the proportion of the amount given to charity
by British citizens.
Overall
, the Blue bar represents the period
from 1990 and the orange colour bar is 2010.According to
the graph,it is clear that
,
middle Remove the comma
apply
age
people
provided more amount in the period
1990, while
youngsters gave money
to charity
is less in the year
2010.
To begin
with, starts with the age
range 18-25, both the year
only a few people
contribute amount to the charity
. That is
17% in 1990 and 6% in 2010. Furthermore
, in 1990 only 31% of people
, which are between the age
of 26-35, gives money
to welfare and also
near to 25% of individuals in 2010.
In the beginning period
, in the age
range of 36-50, 44% of humans paid money
to charity
. As well as
in 2010, significantly it went down and reach 35%.
However
, In the old age
that is
51-65, In the year
1990, 35% of people
contribute money
to charity
. Whereas
in 2010, it increased to 4% which is 39%. Last
but not least, those
above 65 Change preposition
for those
age
, residents spend money
on charity
about 34% in the year
1990 and 35% in 2010.Submitted by anjualex444 on
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