■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates, during the
period
between 1990 and 2010, the proportion of the amount given to Use synonyms
charity
by British citizens.
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Overall
, the Blue bar represents the Linking Words
period
from 1990 and the orange colour bar is 2010.Use synonyms
According to
the graph,Linking Words
it is clear that
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,
middle Remove the comma
apply
age
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people
provided more amount in the Use synonyms
period
1990, Use synonyms
while
youngsters gave Linking Words
money
to Use synonyms
charity
is less in the Use synonyms
year
2010.
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To begin
with, starts with the Linking Words
age
range 18-25, both the Use synonyms
year
only a few Use synonyms
people
contribute amount to the Use synonyms
charity
. Use synonyms
That is
17% in 1990 and 6% in 2010. Linking Words
Furthermore
, in 1990 only 31% of Linking Words
people
, which are between the Use synonyms
age
of 26-35, gives Use synonyms
money
to welfare and Use synonyms
also
near to 25% of individuals in 2010.
In the beginning Linking Words
period
, in the Use synonyms
age
range of 36-50, 44% of humans paid Use synonyms
money
to Use synonyms
charity
. Use synonyms
As well as
in 2010, significantly it went down and reach 35%.
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However
, In the old Linking Words
age
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that is
51-65, In the Linking Words
year
1990, 35% of Use synonyms
people
contribute Use synonyms
money
to Use synonyms
charity
. Use synonyms
Whereas
in 2010, it increased to 4% which is 39%. Linking Words
Last
but not least, Linking Words
those
above 65 Change preposition
for those
age
, residents spend Use synonyms
money
on Use synonyms
charity
about 34% in the Use synonyms
year
1990 and 35% in 2010.Use synonyms
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