The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarize the information by reporting the main features
The given diagram illustrates the process of producing
milk
and dairy products
.
Overall
,it involves 8 stages ranging from cow raring to the supply of the finished products
to the supermarket for sales and consumption.
To begin
with, this
involves 2 stages which are the first stage is in
the farm and the second in the factory. Change preposition
on
Firstly
healthy cows are rare in the farms to reproductive stage. The Lactating herds are milked daily in the mornings and evenings with the aid of milking
machine. The Add an article
a milking
the milking
milk
are
collected and Change the verb form
is
storef
in the refrigerator for presentation. Correct your spelling
stored
Thereafter
,the milk
is transported to the factory with a milk
tanker for onward processing.
In the factory, dairy products
, cream,butter and cheese are extracted from
and the Change preposition
apply
milk
is further
preserved by the process of
Pasteurization. However
, the milk
and it's
Replace the word
its
products
are ready for consumption and are sent to the supermarket for sales
to consumers.Fix the agreement mistake
sale
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