You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

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Dear Miss Simi, I am writing
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letter with respect to your concert which was held recently and I am of the opinion that you did very well. I have attended a lot of musical recitals but I must say
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was one of the best. Though I was sceptical about attending the concert because of the bad experience I had with other musical recitals, I am super ecstatic that my friends made me attend
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concert. I loved every bit of your performance from the set-up to the lighting, to the sound and to the costumes. Asides
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, the top burner for me was your voice range and your facial expression
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performing. In a few weeks, I will be having a
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festival which will feature different artists from different parts of the city and with various genres of
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. I organize
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festival every year to bring
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lovers together and connect various artists. I would be really glad if you can help with training some children in
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and how to perform on stage
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singing.
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, I would like you to perform during the
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festival as a guest artist. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Ayomide.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
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  • in additional
  • moreover
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  • for example
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  • therefore
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  • even though
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
  • skillset
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