You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities
Dear Miss Simi,
I am writing
this
letter with respect to your concert which was held recently and I am of the opinion that you did very well.
I have attended a lot of musical recitals but I must say this
was one of the best. Though I was sceptical about attending the concert because of the bad experience I had with other musical recitals, I am super ecstatic that my friends made me attend this
concert. I loved every bit of your performance from the set-up to the lighting, to the sound and to the costumes. Asides all
of Change preposition
from all
this
, the top burner for me was your voice range and your facial expression while
performing.
In a few weeks, I will be having a music
festival which will feature different artists from different parts of the city and with various genres of music
. I organize this
festival every year to bring music
lovers together and connect various artists.
I would be really glad if you can help with training some children in music
and how to perform on stage while
singing. Also
, I would like you to perform during the music
festival as a guest artist.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Ayomide.Submitted by omolefeyikemi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite