Writing Task 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, •explain why you changed jobs •describe your new job •tell him / her your other news

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Hello,my loving friend Hanan. How are you? I am your dear girlfriend Shahlo. To cut it short, I have got a lot of new tidings for you.

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, one of the best news is I changed my

job

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. I hope you will like my new profession. Because, as you know, my old

job

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is unpleasant and boring for me. As

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, there is no convenience in my former occupation.

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, I changed my previous profession. My new

job

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is as a teacher. Because I love the teaching profession.

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, I choose it. If my memory serves me correctly, I started

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occupation almost two months ago. To tell the truth, my fresh

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is entertaining and funny.

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, I have got another piece of news for you.

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news is I opened a fresh store approximately four months ago. There are a lot of variety comforts and affordable things in my new store. Until we meet, bye my close friend Hanan. I love you. I will wait for a letter from you.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

173 words

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The Closing

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