The diagram shows the different stages in the process of recycling waste paper by machine.
The diagram shows the different stages in the process of recycling waste
paper
by machine.
It is clear that
there are six steps in total, starting with collecting untreated paper
and ending with finished paper
made by a machine.
At the first
stage
of the paper
-recycling process, waste paper
is collected from public paper
banks and businesses. The next stage
is classifying these papers in which workers separate recycled paper
into different levels of quality and remove low-grade paper
. Having been sorted by hand, these papers are delivered to the paper
factory.
After that, the number of paper
which is in the paper
mill is freed from dirty things, made paper
into a pulp, and removed other materials. At the following stage
, all the paper
is gotten rid of inks and glues. This
stage
is called the de-inking step. The process ends with manufacturing usable paper
. This
is followed by a machineSubmitted by joyce.ta213 on
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