The diagram explains the way in which recycled organic waste is used in the manufacture of garden fertilizer.

The diagram explains the way in which recycled organic waste is used in the manufacture of garden fertilizer.
The diagram illustrates different stages in the production of making garden
fertilizer
(Compost) by recycling organic waste.
Overall
, there are 5 main steps in the process of producing
fertilizer
beginning with requiring a plastic
container
and ending with making compost. As can be seen, the first step in making garden
fertilizer
is preparing a plastic
container
of 2m³ with several holes alongside the body of the
container
.
This
enables air can be sent out and in a
container
because air is played a crucial role in decomposing. After that, organic materials that included food at the bottom, next is grass and newspaper respectively are put into a
container
with 15cm of depth for each layer. In the next stage of the process, having been added nitrogen and hot water inside the
container
at the same time, a mixture is
then
happened a chemical reaction by heating over the next half of the year inside the closed plastic
container
. During
this
process, the heated mixture releases hot gas via the air vents.
Finally
, the lid can be removed and the compound can be formed as
fertilizer
in the garden.
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