The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The graph compares the
number
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of travellers visiting a particular Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017.
According to
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the line chart, there was a significant growth trend in the total
number
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of
tourists
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. In 2010, the Caribbean
island
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had the fewest
number
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of
tourists
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, reaching 1
million
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.
However
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, it climbed moderately to about 2.7
million
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visitors
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in 2016 and rose rapidly to about 3.5
million
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in the year of 2017. The
number
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of
visitors
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staying on cruise ships or islands reached 0.3 and 0.8
million
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visitors
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respectively. Its quantity remains unchanged in the first year, and
then
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the
number
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of
tourists
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staying on the
island
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increased at a huge rate to 1.5
million
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by 2013. Its numbers remained the same for the next two years. and had slight fluctuations until 2017. The
number
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of
visitors
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staying on cruise ships exceeded that of other
visitors
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in 2016 and reached a peak of 2
million
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visitors
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in the
last
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year.
Overall
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, there was a certain downward trend in the
number
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of
tourists
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visiting a Caribbean
island
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for 7 years.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, tourists, million, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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