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The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The vertical bar graph illustrates changes in the sales of hybrid vehicles in Japan, the US and other nations over three years from 2006.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that
although
American
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 figure remained
its
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 high level throughout, Japan and others marginally grew
its
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 number and the former country witnessed a surge
at the end
 of the period.
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with
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 the total figure,
whereas
 it started at 360,000 in 2006, it eventually became almost twice as many as its original in 2009, standing at 740,000. The country which contributed to the industry the most was the US which kept its large amount of sales, whose number was between 250,000 and 350,000.
On the other hand
,
while
 Japan sold approximately 50,000
hybric
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hybrid
 vehicles in the initial year, its number
skyroketted
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skyrocketed
 to outnumber
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counterpart
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 three years later with its peak at around 325,000 after its gradual rising by 2008. Meanwhile,
although
 the increasing rate was much smaller than the proceeding nation, the figure
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 other countries constantly went up from 50,000 to around 160,000 over the designated three years.
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