Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your work Say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a

laptop

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which is

solt

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sold

by your seller. It is made from iron and cheap, black. The

laptop

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is the commodity of Accer company. But there are several problems with the gadget.

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, it is working very slowly. Especially, word, excel program

are

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too awful.

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, every day I need

to

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help from others

for

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apply

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using

this

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laptop

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and they are disturbed by me. So, a lot of workers are too nervous

from

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about

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the situation.

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as

,

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my boss, my assistant.

Secondly

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, I can not use

for

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the

internet

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Internet

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. I try to work

with

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online. But it is difficult. I consider, there is a problem with the gadget.

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, The

laptop

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is old. I think

,

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it was used by

other person

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another person

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before I

have

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bought it. But your assistant

advice

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advised

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this

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and she

persuade

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to

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me to

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buy me.

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, I am going

to

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back. If you understand me, you will pay back my money. I look forward to your answer letter and my payment. Yours faithfully, Sidiqova Xadiyabonu