The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two diagrams illustrate

road

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access to a town hospital in 2007 and the

changed

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in 2010

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, the city hospital map in 2010 reveals a positive change, which solved some traffic congestion and offered more convenience to people who use public transport to access the hospital. In 2007, the city hospital used to have one straight entry

road

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, staff

car

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park

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including

public

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a public

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car

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park

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was located in the same place.

Besides

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, Bus stops were

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both sides of the hospital

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. By 2010, the capital hospital built a new public

car

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park

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on the east side of the hospital and

staff

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the staff

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car

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park

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was expanded where it used to be. The greatest change is that the bus stops were removed and relocated into a big station by the hospital

road

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Furthermore

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, the main development is that two roundabouts were added

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the city

road

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square and the second one was placed on a hospital ring

road

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. Both solutions could positively reduce traffic congestion on the hospital route and could prevent people and staff

getting

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from getting

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accidents

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into accidents

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, car, park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

177 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

traffic flow
road access
ring road
bus stops
bus station
congestion
parking facilities
pedestrian crossings
vehicular flow
organizational structure
accessibility
enhancements
configuration
dedicated
diverting traffic

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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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