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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In today's world, it is common to see that
instead
 of reading handbooks or newspapers,
people
 prefer using online versions. There is a view that in the nearest future
people
 will use online copies of
books
 and that they will be affordable for everyone. I agree with
this
 statement and I will prove my opinion in
this
 essay. The first and foremost reason is the increasing popularity of information technology. Nowadays,
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plenty of
people
 prefer doing almost everything using the Internet.
For example
, Chat GPT is getting more widespread every day. It is a very useful app for everybody. The reason is that it is a bot that can help you with almost everything, you just need to type a task in a chat box.
Therefore
, a person can find a book that he needs very fast using
this
 bot and chooses from a wide selection of
books
. On top of that, he can do that
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day, even at night. The second reason is comfort. It is not a secret that printed
books
 are very heavy.
In addition
, if a person carries his
books
 in a bag, he can get his back damaged.
Thus
, it is better to use online
books
 because they are located on the Internet and
people
 just need to use their phones or other mobile gadget. In conclusion, I would like to point out that it is a high chance that online
books
 will replace printed ones
due to
 their benefits,
such
 as comfort, an opportunity to get a piece of information very quickly and a choice from a wide range of
books
.
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  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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