A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dea

Dear Jay, Hope
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits.It's been so long since we have had a meet-up and reminisced things.Anyways, Let me talk about your plan for your first ever camping
summer. I'm sure that you will love to spend your time at a place where you will have plenty of things to do.
For example
, there will be options to take part in art and craft , learn piano , participate in culinary courses and so on .
Apart from
,you will join folks from different parts of the country and
will help you in building relationships and making new friends.Other than that,one fantastic thing is the chill nights in which anybody can sing , tell stories and share anything about their life .All in all ,you'll have a great moment . But, there is one disadvantage that I think you will have an issue with.The camp will be overcrowded as more than a hundred people come every year.As far as I know you,You are always afraid of being in a crowd .I just hope
will not bother you on
occasion. Well ,I'm
trying to save some time from other gatherings and spend
summer holiday with you.I'll let you know if I'm
going with you in my next letter. Have a good weekend. Say hello to my uncle and aunt. Warm wishes, Ray
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