You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter: •Describe what you enjoyed about the course •Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course •Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, First of all, I would like to thank you for
useful, practical and interesting cooking seminars. They were extremely good. I was absolutely delighted with how Mr Cook taught us how to properly perform all the cooking procedures, starting from the way of slicing onions and ending with the choice of flavour notes for the taste.
, I realized that his personal feedback for each class participant was valuable.
As a result
, I have been preparing delicious dinners for my wife for two months already. She is absolutely delighted with the diverse range of cuisine which I am able to cook now.
, she said that I am particularly impeccable at Italian pasta Carbonara and Bolognese. Currently, I make them almost every couple of days. What I think is important is the fact that your school offers a wide range of classes ranging from frying steaks with Michelin chefs to making cakes.
, what I am not able to find is a course on making fish dishes.
, if you asked me, I would suggest offering a workshop on cooking
dishes. Kind regards, Nikolai
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