Your friend delivered a baby girl. Congratulate her on this good news and write how you feel. In your letter, explain your situation about your inability to come and see her in person. In your letter: Say how happy you are on this news Explain your situation that you could not attend this important occasion What gifts you have brought for her

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Dear Ashly, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits.It's been so long since we've had a meet-up and reminisced things.Anyways,I'd love to say that I was on the night cloud when I heard about your baby's delivery

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week . Well,It's great news that my childhood friend is now a mother of a cute baby girl.I'd like to congratulate you on your new journey.

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,I want to apologize for not being with you on your special day.I'm unable to meet you because I am out of town for two more weeks.I am in Vancouver right now for a business-related seminar.As soon as It'll finish ,I'll come to your place to meet you and your princess. I've already bought some gifts for her.Most of them are clothes and toys but one thing that's most beautiful is a heart-shaped pendant with a gold chain that she can wear when she gets old.I can't wait to visit you. Have a healthy and happy life. Warm Wishes, Ann

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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170 words

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