A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the musuem • Describe some skill and qualities you have the would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regard to applying for the role of voluntary/unpaid vacancy position at the museum. I consider myself the right fit for the position at

this

time.

To begin

with, I am a sophomore student at Babcock University studying history and literature.

This

experience would expose me to historical books and artefacts.

In addition

this

, I would be able to familiarize myself with the tourists who visit the museum regularly as they usually have very good information on the culture of Osun State.

Firstly

, I have interpersonal skills which I gained working at the school library in my first year.

Secondly

, I have communication skills interacting with various students in my faculty over the years.

Lastly

, Booking keeping skills as I am positive

this

is crucial for the position. I currently help my dad at his office on workdays

hence

I am free over the weekend. The gallery is a short distance from my house so I would be available to work from 8 am - 6 pm when the building closes on Saturdays.

However

, I attend Sunday service.

hence

I would not be available till 1 pm and I am free to work till the building closes at 6. I would appreciate it if I am considered for

this

role. Yours Faithfully, Ponmile Alabi

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

220 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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