Some think that printed books are not necessary in the digital era, because all writing can be stored electronically. Others think printed books still play an important role. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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the development of technology,
books
can be stored electronically.People hold
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opinion about
this
,some people prefer
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or
use
electronic
books
,
while
others still take
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the printed
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book
seriously. When we talk about electronic
books
,handy is the first thing
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to me.
For example
unlike
paper
books
electronic
books
can be stored in a single device,
such
as our
smart phone
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smartphone
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or
ipad
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iPad
, which we can bring with us
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so that we will never say we forgot to bring a
book
.
Further
more
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electronic
book
is
also
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friendly,
this
is obviously because the
book
is
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digital, so it doesn’t require
paper
,
that
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which
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means more electronic
book
we
use
less
paper
we waste on printing.
On the other hand
,
printed
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book
seems still has a lot of users, especially among students.There are some good
reason
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reasons
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for that.For one thing, as we know students need to take some notes when they study. It is easier for them to take
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notes
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on
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printed
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the printed
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book
than
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a
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an
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electronic
book
and mark some
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or paragraphs in different
colors
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. For another,
paper
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book
is more reliable than
electronic
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an electronic
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one. Because
,
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electronic
books
require a device
such
as
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a kindle
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kindle
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Kindle
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or
ipad
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iPad
to
use
,and if those
device
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lose
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their power,you need to find a place to charge them.
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outside,it is hard to find a place to charge.
To sum up
,both side of opinion has their good reasons. In my point of view, people should
use
printed
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the printed
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book
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books
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when they are convenient,
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and use
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electronic
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the electronic
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book
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books
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when they are on some kind of trip.
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both
way
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can keep
efficiency
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the efficiency
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of daily work.
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