Rich countries should not give jobs to the skilled workers (for example doctors and engineers) of poor countries as they are needed by their home country more than rich countries. How far do you agree or disagree with the statements given?

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The migration of skilled people to developed regions is not a new phenomenon.

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, it has been rising dramatically for the

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few decades.

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may appear advantageous to the

workers

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and host

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but it is harmful to the economies of the poorer

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. Developed societies get immense benefits by offering jobs to skilled squads in underdeveloped

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rich states have a well-developed economy, which requires a more highly skilled public for the efficient operation of the country.

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foreign

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work at lower wages compared to the native people.

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is helpful to private organizations they can cut their costs and offer reasonably priced services and products in domestic and international markets.

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, authorities in some

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make it difficult for foreign

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to have a legal right so that they have no access to governmental aid.

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situation is indeed harmful to underdeveloped

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because they spend lots of money on educating and training professionals like doctors, engineers, scientists etc. It is estimated that in India (as India consists of the largest pool of skilled

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and fresh graduates in the world) the government spend billions of dollars on tertiary education but when the time comes to serve the country, the skilled graduates migrate to foreign lands.

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process is called 'brain drain' and it actually widens the gap among the economies of the world. All in all, it is true that skilled people are needed everywhere. I feel they are needed more in their home

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because they should pay back to their motherland by living there and serving their community. Henceforth, rich states should limit the number of foreign skilled

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Md. Anwar HossainWed May 24 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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281 words

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Rich countries should not give jobs to the skilled workers (for example doctors and engineers) of poor countries as they are needed by their home country more than rich countries. How far do you agree or disagree with the statements given?

Fully explain your ideas

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.