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The numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods ?

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 Ashdown during the year before and the after the year it was changed. The charts indicate answers to surveys asking
guest
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 how they were happy with their experience during the same two periods.40 Before changing 74000 company visit museums during the year. After changing 92000
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 visit the foundation. Before the refurbishment 40 per cent of
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were
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 dissatisfied results of surveys of visitor satisfaction. 30 chunk of
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 satisfied. 15 per cent of
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 very satisfied with the building visit. After ,rework 15
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 dissatisfied and 40 bonus of
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 satisfied with the building experience. 35 per cent of
community
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 are very satisfied. İt can be concluded that refurbishment of the museum make result increase in
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 total number of visitors which is 16000. Refurbishment results positively in the survey because the satisfied person's portion increases by 10
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 and the very satisfied person's
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 by 20 bonus
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decreases
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • survey results
  • very satisfied
  • improved facilities
  • exhibits
  • attendance
  • comparison
  • increase/decrease
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