Many manufacturerd food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Sugar
is a natural ingredient used in food for sweet
taste. Correct article usage
a sweet
Although
, any type of sweet causes health
issues. I will not agree with the point that to incease
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increase
price
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the price
items
which contains sugar
to avoid less usage which leads to healthy life. It is totally wrong.
First of all, only sugar
is not a reason to
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for
health
problems in human beings. Sometimes, you need sugar
for good health
. In rural areas, people cannot live without tea because they think tea overcome
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the
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body
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Moreover
, sugar
is the main ingredient in the making process of tea. For example
, in Pakistan, the proportion of sugar
to rice is 20kg to 5kg. It means a single household monthly products
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sugar
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of sugar
rice
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of rice
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results
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result
sugar
is commonly used in Pakistan.
Secondly
, the big reason is the economy
. Economy
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The economy
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popular
For instance
, India is a big economy
state. Its major export is sugarcane. My reason to include Replace the word
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point is that if regime
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price
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the price
sugar
items
then
the citizens will boycott sugar
products and in
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result
the main export product is boycotted which leads to Add a comma
,result
downturn
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a downturn
the
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in the
economy
of the nation.
To sum up
, neither increase in price
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the price
items
which contains sweet nor boycott
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a boycott
items
will help to reduce health
issues because smoking can also
kill person
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a person
the person
In addition
, sugar
is less harmful than smoking.Submitted by aqilabbas29 on
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