The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate how Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
and bananas were sold in a 5-year period from 1999. The data is measured in million for the UK
, Switzerland
, Denmark
, Belgium and Sweden
.
Overall
, it is clear that
,
there was a dramatic increase Remove the comma
apply
of
Change preposition
in
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee
in UK
, Correct article usage
the UK
while
this
figure followed a marginal growth for other countries. A substantial increase was the case in the index of sales
of bananas for Switzerland
, while
that for the UK
and Belgium witnessed a steady rise. However
, there were
a moderate reduction for Change the verb form
was
Sweden
, Denmark
Looking at the details, the number of sales
of coffee
increased dramatically from 1.5 ml to 20 between 19999 and 2004 in the UK
, while
the figure for Switzerland
doubled in 2004. The indicates for coffee
sales
on
Belgium experienced a marginal rise from 1 to 1.7, Change preposition
in
while
the number for Denmark
(1.8) and Sweden
(0.8) increased by 0.2 until 2004.
There was a substantial upward of the index of Switzerland
bananas Change noun form
Switzerland's
sales
from 15 to 47, steady
growth from 1 to 3.5 and from 0.6 to 4 Change preposition
with steady
accordingly
. A dramatic decrease was the case in the index of banana sales
of Sweden
and Denmark
by almost 1 in accordance.Submitted by moxinurabjalilova on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, uk, switzerland, denmark, sweden, sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "substantial" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "marginal" was used 2 times.
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