The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate how Fairtrade-labelled
coffeeand bananas were sold in a 5-year period from 1999. The data is measured in million for the
Denmark, Belgium and
it is clear that
,there was a dramatic increase
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thisfigure followed a marginal growth for other countries. A substantial increase was the case in the index of
salesof bananas for
whilethat for the
UKand Belgium witnessed a steady rise.
werea moderate reduction for
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DenmarkLooking at the details, the number of
coffeeincreased dramatically from 1.5 ml to 20 between 19999 and 2004 in the
whilethe figure for
Switzerlanddoubled in 2004. The indicates for
onBelgium experienced a marginal rise from 1 to 1.7,
whilethe number for
Sweden(0.8) increased by 0.2 until 2004. There was a substantial upward of the index of
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salesfrom 15 to 47,
steadygrowth from 1 to 3.5 and from 0.6 to 4
accordingly. A dramatic decrease was the case in the index of banana
Denmarkby almost 1 in accordance.
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