The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate how Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and bananas were sold in a 5-year period from 1999. The data is measured in million for the
UK
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,
Switzerland
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,
Denmark
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, Belgium and
Sweden
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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,
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apply
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there was a dramatic increase
of
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in
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sales
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of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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in
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UK
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the UK
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,
while
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this
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figure followed a marginal growth for other countries. A substantial increase was the case in the index of
sales
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of bananas for
Switzerland
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,
while
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that for the
UK
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and Belgium witnessed a steady rise.
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, there
were
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a moderate reduction for
Sweden
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,
Denmark
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Looking at the details, the number of
sales
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of
coffee
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increased dramatically from 1.5 ml to 20 between 19999 and 2004 in the
UK
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,
while
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the figure for
Switzerland
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doubled in 2004. The indicates for
coffee
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sales
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on
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in
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Belgium experienced a marginal rise from 1 to 1.7,
while
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the number for
Denmark
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(1.8) and
Sweden
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(0.8) increased by 0.2 until 2004. There was a substantial upward of the index of
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Switzerland
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Switzerland's
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bananas
sales
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from 15 to 47,
steady
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with steady
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growth from 1 to 3.5 and from 0.6 to 4
accordingly
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. A dramatic decrease was the case in the index of banana
sales
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of
Sweden
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and
Denmark
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by almost 1 in accordance.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, uk, switzerland, denmark, sweden, sales with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "substantial" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "marginal" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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