The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs above illustrate the percentage of households with electrical alliances and the duration of housework per week in each house from 1920 to 2019. Data was taken every 20 years and only evaluated washing
machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners. In general, the number of all three household electronics
weresignificantly rising throughout the years,
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whereasthe time needed to clean the house was depleting. When we look at the details, there are several key points.
machines, the refrigerator category had the sharpest increase. Starting with only 30% own items in 1920, it rose steadily to approximately 20% in each year,
thenit reached 100% position in 2000, and it stayed until 2019.
Second,the trend of buying and using washing
machineswas similar to the refrigerator category. The main difference was, it reached 100% in 1980.
Third,the number of people using vacuum cleaners was the lowest among others, and the number didn't increase dramatically in all years, which was only a
30 pointgap. In conclusion, washing
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machineswere the most stable and preferable electronics across evaluated time.
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