The charts below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The given charts
depicts
information about the destination of UK graduates and post-graduates after the college period in the year 2008. Change the verb form
depict
Overall
, it can be seen that in both cases, the Linking Words
students
who choose to Use synonyms
further
study were the majority number, Linking Words
while
the lowest amount of Linking Words
students
choose to do voluntary work after college.
Use synonyms
Initially
, for Linking Words
students
who graduated and post-graduated in the UK, Use synonyms
further
study was responsible for the highest amount destination, accounting for almost 30,000 Linking Words
students
in both situations. We can Use synonyms
also
see that Linking Words
for
graduated and post-graduated Change preposition
apply
students
who choose Use synonyms
for
part-time work presented a Change preposition
apply
slightly
difference between them, comprehending Change the adverb
slight
for
almost 20,000 and 2,500 respectively. Change preposition
apply
Finally
, for post-graduate Linking Words
Use synonyms
students
the amount of unemployment between them showed a difference of almost 100 per cent in comparison to graduate Add a comma
,students
students
, account for 1,625 and 16,235 Use synonyms
respectivelly
.
To summarize, it is possible to confirm that the number of graduated Correct your spelling
respectively
students
in the timeframe was almost 100 per cent different Use synonyms
of
those who were post-graduateChange preposition
from
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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