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Teenagers are facing more problems these days as compared to old days. The reason is that parents are spending less time at home. Agree or Disagree.

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Nowadays,parents have to work around the clock to fulfil the needs of their offspring
due to
 high inflation.
As a result
,infants are facing many more obstacles than in the past.I agree with the statement
due to
 the following reasons.
To begin
 with,offspring may shortage in proper healthy diet
due to
 the absence of time spent by their parents at home.Investing most of their time at their job,they avoid cooking at home.
Therefore
,infants have to eat readymade food which contains transfats leads to obesity.It is reported that obesity is the main reason for various diseases
such
 as high blood pressure or diabetes.
Moreover
,
this
 approach may lead children to aggressive behaviour.
Instead
 of investing their quality time with their mother and father,offspring are wasting that on playing video games.It is proven that aggressive behaviour is directly co-related with games.
Apart from
this
,having a higher screen might affect their eyesight.
Also
,
this
 can result in weak relations between family members.
In addition
 to it,
this
 trend can cause a lack of social skills in children.They learn most of the basic skills from their elders
such
 as how to behave with others.
To conclude
,
due to
 a lack of maintaining a proper diet or social skills,toddlers are facing much more problems than in the past.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pervasive influence
  • moderated by
  • family dynamics
  • dual-income households
  • demands of work
  • neglect of
  • emotional and developmental needs
  • risky behaviors
  • substance abuse
  • seek attention and validation
  • broader societal
  • economic and technological factors
  • mitigate issues
  • prioritizing quality time
  • open lines of communication
  • actively participating
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