Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present.

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Dear Navid, I was really happy when I heard that you have a baby. Our friend Mohammad showed me the picture. He is adorable. Since I am the prime candidate for being his godfather, I decided to buy the most wonderful present for him. Yesterday, I went to the mall and bought a ball for him. It is a small one with a picture of the champions league picture on it. I bought

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because we always used to play football, and I believe he would do

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all the time, so I wanted to buy him something that persuades him to start playing football sooner.

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, I have a piece of good news for you. Tomorrow I want to visit the city, and if you have some spare time, I will be really glad to see you, Sara and my charming godson Ali so that I can give him his present. Please let me know if you are available. Best regards Amir

amirghas92Wed May 24 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

163 words

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