Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present.

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Dear Navid, I was really happy when I heard that you have a baby. Our friend Mohammad showed me the picture. He is adorable. Since I am the prime candidate for being his godfather, I decided to buy the most wonderful present for him. Yesterday, I went to the mall and bought a ball for him. It is a small one with a picture of the champions league picture on it. I bought

this

because we always used to play football, and I believe he would do

this

all the time, so I wanted to buy him something that persuades him to start playing football sooner.

Lastly

, I have a piece of good news for you. Tomorrow I want to visit the city, and if you have some spare time, I will be really glad to see you, Sara and my charming godson Ali so that I can give him his present. Please let me know if you are available. Best regards Amir

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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