The food industry is currently reaching to the new level, today, the imported food is the top favored choice, however some people think that eating it will bring back some drawbacks. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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imported
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from other
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is
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famous choices in
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industry, but some
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argue that
earing
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eating
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it will be negative I believe that negative points
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the positive
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in view of the price of products and poor
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of the products. On the positive points,
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can know the different
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through
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imported
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, because the taste is varied from
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to
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, which encourages them to understand and accept diversity.
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imported
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help
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incase
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in case
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of
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food shortage. Other
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can provide necessary
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with civil, which is really helpful.
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, on the negative points.
Consumers
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would be worried about the
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of imported
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. Probably, Citizens in the
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are used to
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of own
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country's
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one, so it is hard to try new
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.
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, the rice is dramatically
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and different from
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to
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. How soft and caste the rice is varied between Japan and Thailand.
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to that, depending on imported
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would be
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to own
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's
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far over
and
producers
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. Those
foods
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are relatively cheaper than domestic
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, which leads to
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select
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and
purchase
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the
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imported
ones
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. It can be hard for
producers
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. because their
producers
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cannot be selling well. If
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this
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bad trends continued, domestic economic development can be Stagnant or depressed. In conclusion.
The imported
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foods
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have some benefits in terms of diversity and
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if it's necessary,
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, it has the risk of poor
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, being
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to own
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's
producers
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and economic growth.
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,
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foods
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from other
countries
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have more drawbacks than benefits.
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