The food industry is currently reaching to the new level, today, the imported food is the top favored choice, however some people think that eating it will bring back some drawbacks. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

It is often
orgued
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argued
that
the
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imported
foods
from other
countries
is
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are
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famous choices in
food
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the food
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industry, but some
consumers
argue that
earing
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eating
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it will be negative I believe that negative points
overtakes
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overtake
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the positive
ones
in view of the price of products and poor
quality
of the products. On the positive points,
consumers
can know the different
culture
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cultures
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through
the
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imported
foods
, because the taste is varied from
country
to
country
, which encourages them to understand and accept diversity.
Also
,
the
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imported
foods
help
countries
incase
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in case
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of
the
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food shortage. Other
countries
can provide necessary
foods
with civil, which is really helpful.
However
, on the negative points.
Consumers
would be worried about the
quality
of imported
foods
. Probably, Citizens in the
country
are used to
taste
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of own
country's
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country
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one, so it is hard to try new
ones
.
For example
, the rice is dramatically
quality
and different from
country
to
country
. How soft and caste the rice is varied between Japan and Thailand.
In addition
to that, depending on imported
foods
would be
harm
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to own
country
's
farovers
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far over
and
producers
. Those
foods
are relatively cheaper than domestic
ones
, which leads to
consumers
select
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selecting
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and
purchase
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purchasing
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the
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imported
ones
. It can be hard for
producers
. because their
producers
cannot be selling well. If
this
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bad trends continued, domestic economic development can be Stagnant or depressed. In conclusion.
The imported
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Imported
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foods
have some benefits in terms of diversity and
helpful
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help
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if it's necessary,
however
, it has the risk of poor
quality
, being
harm
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harmful
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to own
country
's
producers
and economic growth.
Therefore
,
the
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foods
from other
countries
have more drawbacks than benefits.
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