The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
picture illustrates the process of making instant noodles in factories. Moreover
, it reveals how this
product appears on supermarket shelves. In general, there are 8 stages in the given diagram, beginning with storage and culminating in labelling and delivering.
The first step is
storage silos. Then
it is needed to mix these with water and oil. Using rollers, these substances have to be doughed to sheets and then
to strips. Once they are doughed, they should be made into noodles discs. After that, it should be cooked with oil and dried. Only after adding vegetables and spices, it can be put in cups. Soon after, cups are needed to be labelled. Only after
this
stage, it is ready to be delivered to the food shops. Last
, but not the least, it is delivery.
Overall
, it takes a considerably long time for a product to get to a supermarket.Submitted by gulnara.7676 on
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