News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
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news
editors have the main responsibility for giving the decision
for publishing news
either on Television and
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in Newspaper
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This
essay will explain several factors behind this
important decision
. Regardless of the flooded
from bad Replace the word
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news
, society
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while
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with, the
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news
has become the major decision
for the
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news
editors. Either through the television or the newspaper, the society
need
the exact information on what is really happening around them. Change the verb form
needs
For instance
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, those horrible events can be used as Fix the agreement mistake
disaster
a preventive actions
for those who are not experiencing that. The second factor comes from how viral one event among Correct the article-noun agreement
a preventive action
preventive actions
the
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society
. The viral news
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society
. By picking up this
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For example
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news
, we tend to close our mind regarding of
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bad things.
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