Some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your option

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now could consume freshwater easily.

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people use

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advantage unwisely, and others believe that the government should tackle

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issue.

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essay will discuss both views. It is widely believed that technological advancement has provided communities

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covinient

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convenient

access to clear

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, the

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ussage

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usage

not

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only limited

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consumption and cleaning things

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for making entertainment

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as

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and

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, in

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there are a lot of

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in every villa or hotel. People there did not have any struggles in terms to get fresh

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, societies across the world used

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not only for primary needs

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secondary

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needs.

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, several communities have

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of view and

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against

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habit. Those communities believed that we should use

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wisely as there are many parts of the world still lacking

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access.

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twenty years ago we could easily get fresh

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from 5 meters from the surfaces, yet the surfaces today

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full of dirt so

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the

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contain virus, bacteria, and others. Even though

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there are

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appliances to overcome it, citizens still believed that the government should establish regulations

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issue. In conclusion,

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human

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provided

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by

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everyday

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, they could not

spent

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it in

unappropriate

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ways.

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, many surfaces in

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world

already

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poisoned and it

dangerous

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for people to consume. Unless the government take action to overcome

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issue, humans in the future will

be lacked

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of

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fresh

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