The given diagram illustrates the lifecycle of a butterfly.

The given diagram illustrates the lifecycle of a butterfly.
The given diagram illustrates the lifecycle of a butterfly. It can be seen from the diagram that, there are four stages of
butterfly’s
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a butterfly’s
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lifetime cycle (the
egg
, the
caterpillar
, the chrysalis and the adult emerges ) in order to become an adult butterfly. With regards to the first stage of the
biocycle
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cycle
of a butterfly is the
egg
. It is seen that the butterfly lays its
egg
under the leaf and it looks very small and oval. The next stage in the process, it is a
caterpillar
.
It is clear that
,
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the
caterpillar
comes out from the
egg
. From the diagram, we can see that it eats leaves. After eating leaves, the
caterpillar
attains its complete growth and it becomes a chrysalis. Within the pupa, its body undergoes a remarkable transformation and is converted into
adult
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an adult
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emerges. In conclusion, the process achieves its goal by using four stages to become a striking butterfly.
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