People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is said that the quality of life has improved tremendously.

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to, previous centuries. I believe

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is true that we have a much better life quality and I will give my reason in

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essay.

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with, I think

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the Internet

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has developed so far in the 21st

century

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which has improved our lives so much. nowadays, it is easy to use and solve our issues with the Internet that were hard to solve.

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, money can be transferred effortlessly with some apps on our cell phones.

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, before , we had to go to a bank

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money.

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, our medical facility has enhanced during the 21st

century

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. now we have several new machines and equipment.

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, we have vaccines Which prevent us

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ill. but before people died because of some disease which we cure them easily now

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say, influenza killed many individuals.

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, some people believe that the environmental impact of our technology and our lifestyle can't be recuperated as we have polluted our air and water so much.

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, we have lost many species that we had in the previous

century

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, there are several Pandas and polar bears which are under threat of extinction now.

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,in my ,opinion people should change their lifestyles to prevent all of

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damage. In conclusion, our lives have developed so much in the 21st

century

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thanks to the Internet which made our life much easier and medical improvement that has raised our chance of living.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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5 paragraphs

254 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Technological advancements
Healthcare improvements
Economic growth
Social changes
Global connectivity
Standard of living
Life expectancy
Gender equality
Legal rights
Globalization
Cultural exchange
Access to information
Environmental concerns
Sustainable development
Stress levels
Quality of life
Medical progress
Job opportunities
Income disparity
Life satisfaction

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People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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